Thursday, June 16, 2005

The Moon Stalker (A Science Poem, Of Sorts) Comments

Rating: 3.8

The moon stalker surges
with twice daily urges
creeps from the deep
watch his spring not the neap
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Chuck Audette
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Susan Williams 06 January 2016

I enjoyed the wit and humor and sly references - good piece

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M Asim Nehal 06 January 2016

you're within his reach as you tan at the beach he may tickle your toes but then grows whilst you doze

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Barry Van Allen 05 May 2007

Chuck, Perhaps, I got it wrong ... but, eventually you did Caesar? B.V.A.

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Esther Leclerc 02 May 2006

I had to look up 'neap' and now appreciate the line 'watch his spring not the neap' very much! A truly pleasing poem, Chuck, with your trademark wit in full evidence. Est : ]

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Anna Russell 21 February 2006

Puns about plots and now plays (geddit?) on Shakespere. Can I have some of your clever pills please? Oh, and have a 9. Hugs Anna xxx

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Chuck Audette

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