Wednesday, September 21, 2011

The Moon's Lullaby Comments

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We lay in the parking lot, trying to find God,
I did not know her, but I held her as a friend,
We shared passion and serenity as we'd bend,
So Zeus praised us holy, his gift the lightning rod;
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Vipins Puthooran 22 September 2011

Waves that dove divine..what a beautiful line.. I like that one and tides sweet as wine.. Amazing... Well written...

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 September 2011

grasping flowers gilded gold, Guided by the beacon, guarded by ancient trolls; Alliteration of words with the 'g' letter i appreciate very much...Schön geschrieben...

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