Sunday, September 16, 2012

The Moon Rise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love came to me like sunshine
So bright, cheerful, and invigorating
I didn't just open the window
All the doors of my heart were thrown open
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Savita Tyagi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2018

A brilliant expression has been made on love, pain and nature having nice imagery. It is a beautiful philosophical poem based on metaphor. I cite here few lines.....All the doors of my heart were thrown open / It moved freely lighting up every corner/ The darkness is my silent companion/The sunshine burns my heart now... Thanks.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 July 2017

Under my window! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Neela Nath Das 05 October 2012

Wonderful usage of imagery. a beautiful piece.

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