The Moon Queen's Gift Comments

Revisiting this marvelous poem that captures the many wonders of the beautiful moon. A one of a kind write excellently penned. Loved reading it.

As the clouds/Go floating by/She steers her craft/Across the sky....Fascinating poetic expression! An adorable piece of poetry. I sincerely admire your style of penning, the quality of your expression and choice of diction....Top marks for this beautiful poem.

Thank you Rose Marie for your most inspiring comments and take care. And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you Dominic for your superb comment. Take care.

Rose Marie many thanks for your kind comments and I'm glad you enjoyed it. As you can see and hear there are two versions, for i amended it after posting. And will now upload a final version with yet another small change to those versions. I thank you again and wish you well. Take care.

Dominic thanks for your comment and I hope your niece enjoys it. As you can see and hear the narration is different to the text which was amended after posting. So, I will now upload a Final Version of this poem with a slight change to both versions. And take care and again many thanks.

let wee assume that the moon is metaphorical, and that it shines at night as the sun do at day time, then we know how much the children need the parents, while a smile from them will illuminate the path forever, and thus our expert poet here manipulates words to formulate new meanings and complete the process of his brilliant creativity, and this is what we expect from the talented poet Like Shaun, well done and thanks for this great work 10/10 and onto my favorite list

The Moon Queen sails on, Through the night, With stars that shine, And give her light.

And as the clouds, Go floating by. She steers her craft, Across the sky.

Wonderful, wonderful poem from a brilliant Poet. A poetic gem that will forever shine in the hearts of childeren and even adults. So beautifully crafted and presented with great rhyme and compelling imagery. Onto my Poem List.

Lovely poem Shaun..simple, but very imagination like a all good poetry should beI I adore these kinds of poems especially similar themed ones by Walter de la Mare. i'll definitely share this one with my youngest niece. I think she will really like it. Anyway, it's a moonlight tainted ten from me!

This has been amended and tightened up a wee bit more and flows more smoothly. But it will take time for the new amended version to register.