The Moon Is Wounded: (January 25th,2011) Poem by DM W

The Moon Is Wounded: (January 25th,2011)

Rating: 5.0


The moon is wounded
And wintry skies are broken:
This desolate night.

Sunday, May 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 31 May 2020

A well written Haiku poem of true despair so neatly presented. Oh I so adore a bleak and grim one Dominic. It makes me feel so good to bel alive. 10++ and added to my jar of deep abysmal Welsh despair. Thanks for writing and sharing your fine Haiku.

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Dominic Windram 01 June 2020

Thanks Shaun...yes it's nice to compose grim poems as well as joyful ones.

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