Saturday, January 14, 2012

The Moon Invites You To Drink Whisky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Twice a year..
I drink whisky..
With the moon..
In the first..
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ahmed khaled
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Odejayi Sodiq Adewale 19 January 2012

great poem............................

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Vipins Puthooran 17 January 2012

It's a great poem in your elegant style...top marks! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 15 January 2012

I drink Juices, to embrace the fresh nature, so the freshness will keep me sober in tasteful joy for i will not drunk to forget from protecting nature, mean if i want more freshness shield this world from global warming, so i still can see the moon smile with me...But when the Somali hanger recalled i will even drink my tears, to thankful what we have and pray for moon keep smiling and releasing joy to them via the light_Unwritten Soul

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George Krokos 14 January 2012

Firstly, I don't drink. Secondly, yes I understand what your saying. We all need to do more and avoid those situations.

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Eric Cockrell 14 January 2012

powerful... great use of images. enjoyed it much!

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Dave Walker 14 January 2012

Love it, a fantastic poem my friend.

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