Monday, September 21, 2015

The Moon I Missed Comments

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The Moon I Missed

The Sun asked me, ‘Are you happy’
I told ‘Not at all’
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Dhiren Doley
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Ravinder Kumar Soni 30 December 2020

A very good poem. I stayed in Tinsukia for nearly four years, how I wish I knew where you were.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 September 2015

Marvelous flight of imagination. Enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Dhiren Doley 24 September 2015

Thanks a lot. Let us build a new world.

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Rajnish Manga 21 September 2015

The imagery is fantastic and the dialogue with the sun is unique. In the end it is sacrifice and sadness pervading the atmosphere. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. A quote: The Sun grew pale and told, kill me and take I replied, sorry, sorry, you take her and I die

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Dhiren Doley 24 September 2015

Your comment is greater than the poem. A great poet only can see greatness in other poets. Thanks a lot.

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