Sunday, January 24, 2016

The Moon Heard My Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

On one lonely night
I lay on a bench outside
my house quietly gazing
at the solitary moon.
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Yine Fai
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Seema Jayaraman 24 January 2016

Beauty and perfection in its simplicity... synchronicity so well captured..I am touched.. thanks for sharing

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Nicklas Leow 24 January 2016

Yes, even if there is distance no matter where we are everyone can see the moon which joins our hearts to one another :)

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 January 2016

This beautiful poem has reminded me the Sanskrit epic Meghdoot(cloud messenger) penned by a great Indian poet named Kalidasa, a few centuries ago, who sought the services of a cloud for acting as a messenger for delivering his love message to his beloved. Amazing imagery. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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