Wednesday, March 30, 2016

The Moon Boat Comments

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Live to love like amorous mermaids,
Enjoy the tides in a full moon night,
It's your ocean; it's your passion,
You are yourself a Venus so bright.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 10 October 2018

Terror cannot cut this image of the moon Dancing on the waves it will safely float, It's a cradle; it's a swing, and a rose's bed, It can fly as well; it's a silky moon boat! ...............great thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2018

This is a fascinating poem. I would love to quote the first stanza here: Live to love like amorous mermaids, Enjoy the tides in a full moon night/It's your ocean; it's your passion/You are yourself a Venus so bright.....thanks dear sir for sharing this elegant poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Don't destory this life and this world! Respect the universe and, respect all mankind. Nice piece of work.

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Hazel Durham 12 April 2016

Wow! Sizzling with love for this world to unite us all into a family of different traditions religions and cultures to feel the joy of living, giving and forgiving. The beautiful moon boat is there for us to get on board sailing into a harmonious world where love is our daily food, to right the wrongs to change hate into a sanctuary of love and peace! Outstanding write!

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