Tuesday, February 23, 2010

The Moon Below; The Moon Above Comments

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Above the silver brook,
The willow caressed the moon in the water.

Beneath the willow,
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Kaitlin Bianca
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Bette Dalia 04 July 2010

Wow that is a beautiful poem! Well penned and draws an amazing picture!

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Kayla Alleman 03 July 2010

Amazing poem. I adore the beautiful, descriptive words you used to set the picture in my mind.

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Manonton Dalan 19 March 2010

wow! ... moon's reflection is on their lips.very nice, thanks for sharing.md keep on writing.

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Mariah Burns 23 February 2010

It Took me awhile to get what you ment in this. but now i see and its very beautiful. Great job

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