The Moon And Me Comments

suspect at times Why are you peeping far from the sky? Don't you feel shy for intruding us? What a wonderful imagination pictured in endearing words and expressions. why are u peeping when we engage in intimate acts?

Twinkling tiny stars are glittering diamonds in sky and living with them moon becomes more happy and calm. We feel ever togetherness is happiness. Moon in sky is happy with stars. Moon will definitely make promise. Beautifully stars and sky get whole minds and sky and earth gather for reunion. Beautiful imagery is drawn and this is outstanding poem shared....10

I was pulled into this poem from the beginning with your friendship with the Moon expressed delightfully in bantering speech. You treat the Moon like a friend and the two of you can joke or be serious or be silent. It's all the same you're with someone you can trust. The rapport with the man is something else again. The two of you are still getting to know each other and you portray a winning shyness in both, but also a sincere desire to bridge the gap between you and even accelerate the relationship. But the way men and women interact is culturally determined and there are subtle differences between cultures. I can only say I found your portrayal persuasive, funny and sincere. I love poems that make the Moon a genuine character in the human drama. Of all possible celestial bodies, the Moon alone seems to be a player with us, and not some distant fiery object. I really liked your personification of the Moon!

togetherness is happiness We felt this dictum is true When both of us stood hand in hand so near An excellent poem of love and pursuit for togetherness.Well done. Keep it up 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan.

What a lovely poem - asking the moon not to betray a secret rendezvous. -The cool breeze had fondled the curls of my hair -, beautifully described. I love the entire poem. It gives the reader a detailed description of a romantic encounter and evokes pleasant emotions. Very well done, Mallika.

Beautifully expressed intimacy and nicely composed poem. extracting an assurance from moon nicely said.

The glittering diamond of the sky, anticipating the state of mind the moon and me too say this is one wonderful poem really shared in this forum. Beautifully composed each line. Great work.

moon is far far away from earth