Wednesday, May 30, 2012

The Moon And I Comments

Rating: 5.0

tonight i saw the moon
i thought i saw it smile
i lifted my teacup
it nodded in acceptance
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Eloida Capuno
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 21 June 2012

HALA, this is very beautiful moon is my favorite and i love the way you weave the words and show your connection to it. ang ganda naman ang husay mo naman MABUHAY KA.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 06 June 2012

Subtle and witty piece. I like its striking impact

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2012

Very good poem. I love it. I invite you to read my poem and comment Yours Gajanan Mishra

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