Friday, March 11, 2011

The Moon Comments

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Looming in this space the clouds wrap around its beauty

So tranquil washing into its thrilling musk of mystery
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Sara Tehrani
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Steve Perks 14 March 2011

I love your descriptiveness in this poem. It really gives me an impression that I'm stood there, it's like your words can be touched :) The first 2 lines are great! 'Musk of mystery' - I like that. The moon is a thing of beauty, and so is this poem :) x

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