Saturday, August 2, 2014

The Moon Comments

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Let me admire the moon tonight.
For if I were not blessed with sight,
It had not been beuteous in the night.
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Ayesha Tulkubra
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Rajesh Thankappan 03 August 2014

The moon is beautiful and your portrayal of it is no less beautiful. Keep writing.....

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Saadat Tahir 03 August 2014

welcome to PH... young poet! thanx for posting this lovely poem it is written well, has nice rhyming and has a lucid clear direction.... it deal with a v poetic topic, that has kindled the imagination of countless poets before you. Hardly a poet worth his salt that hasn't delved into some aspect of the limmerant disc's beauty... nice - - more in a PM liked

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