When the work of a deer: the gaze,
has ended to sun's regular fate,
they enter upon the awesome gate,
and wish to play on being totally 'amaze'.
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a very nice poem indeed, i love it, keep writing on anything and without thinking any forms or norms. best wishes.
Beautiful flow of words with good imagery you have woven into a lovely poem. Loved reading it. Keep writing.