Friday, September 28, 2012

The Moon Comments

Rating: 4.8

When dark drops down through the pine pins
And when a baby dove
Closes herself to her mother's warm wings
Then, through the stripes of the coconut leaves
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Susanta Pattnayak
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Susan Lacovara 04 April 2014

I invite you to read my poem, The Breath Of The Moon as I too love to gaze at her beauty. It's interesting to see the moon from r perspective, on your side of the globe. One moon that all can share. Your write was a lovely reflection of such. PEACE

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Hans Vr 04 October 2012

Superb poetry. I do like moon poems and this is among the very best.

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Susanta Pattnayak

Susanta Pattnayak

Bhubaneswar, India
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