Thursday, September 27, 2012

The Moon Comments

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In the dark night, from my chamber,
Through a broken window,
I look at the moon in the sky,
Seeming to be, as if calling me,
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Saeed Jan
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Farah Ilyas 23 April 2013

Such power, that no one can take her, No one can separate her from me, Where, she is the queen of that realm, And will rule, till the last o my breath oh wao what agreat fancy to be imagined...nice poem

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Unwritten Soul 25 October 2012

That was a kick...a nice and strong pulling feelings...well done SJan_Soul

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Eindaray Kyaw 19 October 2012

Wow... i enjoy the flow of your poem...It's so gentle!

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