Sunday, June 2, 2013

The Monsters Comments

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From whence they came upon a night, A wretch, a wreck, an awful sight, How horrid they look, they soon shall come. The monsters, what horrors they bestowed upon some, How horrid they look, they come upon us. Be wary, my friends; be wary, They attack, murder have they wrought on people of yore.

They come upon the village of Earth, Attack, destroy, burn the land. “Rid of them all! Rid of them all! ” The leader of these wretches shouts forever more. For from within these wasted lands of Nevermore, Men, women, and children shall cry.
Forever in the world these beasts shall murder the innocent, Children of the Devil and Lilith, Shall wreak havoc upon us till the Final Judgment. Death be gone, death be gone, Never shall there be rest on us done. Downfall of man, hath we all perished, But what, we shall rise again, Wreck the evils of Heaven, Hell, and Earth.
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Dawn Fuzan 15 May 2014

Paige I enjoyed every line, keep it up

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Gajanan Mishra 02 June 2013

just live and let live, no sin, no virtues, Very good poem my dear poet, go on. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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