The Monster In Your Head Comments

I liked it, but it seems like a self esteem issue. I would love to see it continue and developed that the girl slowly grinds the inside voice and triumphs over the voice. Maybe she can attack the voice... Thx.

I kinda agree with Stephen Buoro. Even though the concept is creative, isn't doesn't exactly 'feel' like a poem. continue writing and you'll improve. Remember 'Life's a learning experience'

This is really different and cool! ! I like the imaginative thoughts in her mind, and how it contrasts with her life outside. i enjoyed it! ! very dramatic: D

Brilliant text I really enjoyed the ride. But don't let the head girl grind you down. ;) Regards Craig.