Hark, the clouds sing a rap along the sky,
Wooly packs on winds fly,
Like sailing ships to mortal eye
Or say armies that conquer
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We indians share yor monsoon. And yor poem is refreshing superb on rain clouds n downpour. It's an exhilarating reader's pleasure. Pls review my fastin poem. :)
pouring like the rain of Monsoon great flow and intensity of colors and images /well done Jasmeen
A standard write...my Poem of the Day! Beautiful poem really! ! !
your nature poems are famous, you have good hand good vocabulary, i liked this piece! 9
Very atmospheric - you paint a beautiful picture with your words.
a resonant ode to monsoon, woven wonderfully! loved the write, Jasmine.
Songsters frolic and dance on boughs, Their rapturous songs sweetly endow Sonority all around. ....Good write. Made me smell the monsoon with your words.
after scorching sun monsoon brings relief in our life. beautiful write