Friday, July 12, 2013

The Monsoon Sky Comments

Rating: 4.6

Hark, the clouds sing a rap along the sky,
Wooly packs on winds fly,
Like sailing ships to mortal eye
Or say armies that conquer
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Yasmin Khan
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Ramesh Rai 26 July 2013

after scorching sun monsoon brings relief in our life. beautiful write

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 July 2013

We indians share yor monsoon. And yor poem is refreshing superb on rain clouds n downpour. It's an exhilarating reader's pleasure. Pls review my fastin poem. :)

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Sallam Yassin 15 July 2013

pouring like the rain of Monsoon great flow and intensity of colors and images /well done Jasmeen

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Shahzia Batool 15 July 2013

A standard write...my Poem of the Day! Beautiful poem really! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 July 2013

Monsoon beauty - beautifully delivered. Thank you.

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Wahab Abdul 13 July 2013

your nature poems are famous, you have good hand good vocabulary, i liked this piece! 9

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Valerie Dohren 12 July 2013

Very atmospheric - you paint a beautiful picture with your words.

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David Wood 12 July 2013

A lovely poem with good imagery of rain and monsoon.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 12 July 2013

a resonant ode to monsoon, woven wonderfully! loved the write, Jasmine.

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Kalpak Kaplash 12 July 2013

Songsters frolic and dance on boughs, Their rapturous songs sweetly endow Sonority all around. ....Good write. Made me smell the monsoon with your words.

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