The monkey stared hard at me
Imitating him, I was?
It was clear his birthright
Who I thought I was?
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When two living things belong to the same branch of life's tree, there are tricks of perspective in their mutual view. One is custodian of the other's origins; one is forecloser of the other's possibilities.
This is poem sublimest, Kesav Sir! A thought-provoking poem with a deep philosophy humorous, bit ironical, but very cleverly written To MyPoemsList.
A wonderful observation! A beautiful poem with fabulous imagery................10
A poem of great depth. It invokes thoughts to ponder about. Cleverly written.
We think we humans are superior to every other being in this universe. How come this? Think how a virus works, for that matter. Thanks for your analytical feedback Rose Marie. Liked
I love this poem. The tables were turned and guess who was behind bars and who was imitating who? Wonderful. Maybe the monkey will have the last laugh on us humans too?
A very good and thought provoking write once again! liked it...
yes. i agree. fantastic write. short but much thoughts embedded.
very meaningful poem... somewhat ironic... worth reflecting for evoking a deep concept fruitful idea hides on it... amusing, intelligible write 10+++
yes you should be put behind the bars for this sarcastic one boss...hahaha....well written
nicely put up....i get a sense of reflection in this poem....nice....kind of water like feeling.....awesome...
absolutely amazing to c life from from the others view..... truly then only we realize what we think is right is actually not right fr all...
ok Kesav this is what I think: I have been a caged monkey for so long I lost sight of my audience and fooled myself into thinking I was a free spirit this poem has put me back to my place, along with the other poet/monkeys
very nicely penned down...good use of sarcasm here sir...thought provoking..10..
this is a really great poem! says so much i think a lot of people feel caged your work shows that 10
the prentetious self at play.. trapped within the cage of our ego...its time to realize that everyone is equal the only force which is superior is that which unknown and unseen
Your clear concept I think we all have pondered, and for the grace of god we have been born free...cages are for mad hatters....we can dream...great subject ++++10 regards uavanice1
yah! you make my day happy...even make me laugh hard to believe but easy to accept, a time monkey business lies ahead at my back..very nice poem for reflection...thank you and God bless... a10++++
That's a good one. As an animal lover, I always feel we are in no way superior than animals. We are superior only in our world. Our intelligence doesn't serve them. They never depend on us. Rather we do.