Friday, March 23, 2018

The Monarch And The Tender Bud [ 4 Narrative Tanka ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a summer
So long ago, when you came
To pluck my blossom
I was just a tender bud
...
Read full text

Nudershada Cabanes
COMMENTS
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 March 2018

Nudershada, such a lovely Tanka....10+++¥

0 0 Reply
Perdita Young 23 March 2018

Beautiful poem, with beautiful picture... the tender bud must feel very happy to have her beauty noticed and appreciated by a worthy lover.

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2018

A monarch hovering in the garden mesmerized mind with colourful wings and this was butterfly. A bud became flower and a nice friendship was made with blooming bud. An amazing and great imagery is drawn here...10

0 0 Reply
Nudershada Cabanes

Nudershada Cabanes

Philippines
Close
Error Success