The Moments After Comments
In the moments after you had gone
It seemed as though time had
Gathered together
To stand beside me,
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Swimming in the sea of sadness yet bursting with a beauty that is refreshing. Evidence of a significant loss. Was it written for you mother? If it were, then read my poem A fallen Tree which was also written when my mother died. Well done my friend!
'The sorrow of loss' has been poignantly portrayed in this beautiful poem. I wonder how it could miss everybody's eyes, not a single comment is here. 'My first breath alone Without you Lonliness poured itself empty into me Filling all of the spaces Sorrow had missed'....An outstanding expression of emptiness and sadness! 'Now each and every moment Consists of the moments after And not one moment before '....A classic poetic thought! Well done,10/10.
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8/1/2025 4:27:19 PM # 1.0.0
I have added this, your beautiful poems to my poem list so that I can be blessed by it from time to time. It is both creative and compelling!