The moment we met you took hold of my thoughts
The moment we met you captured my dreams
You were the light of my life
The one I hoped to see
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Ahhh, luckily a girl does get to experience this once in her life :) mine time is now... :) thanks for puttin OUR feelings in words this wonderful lol, nice poem. keep it up lesly
Ohh i so have felt this way before.....im so glad he said that at the end =] such a awesome poem
Its nice, I like it, shows feeling, you should consider fixing some of the grammatical and spelling errors... Good write...
It's such a nice, sweet poem! A pleasure to read.