Sunday, July 6, 2008

The Moment We Met Comments

Rating: 4.5

The moment we met you took hold of my thoughts
The moment we met you captured my dreams
You were the light of my life
The one I hoped to see
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lesly garza
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Khairul Ahsan 25 April 2015

It's such a nice, sweet poem! A pleasure to read.

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Jessica Robert 04 November 2009

aawwweeee that was soo pretty :) Je l'adore. H&K's Jess ♥

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Ahhh, luckily a girl does get to experience this once in her life :) mine time is now... :) thanks for puttin OUR feelings in words this wonderful lol, nice poem. keep it up lesly

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Tyease Collins 27 August 2008

Ohh i so have felt this way before.....im so glad he said that at the end =] such a awesome poem

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Javier Falcon 17 July 2008

Its nice, I like it, shows feeling, you should consider fixing some of the grammatical and spelling errors... Good write...

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