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Great write! ! Don't give into those self condemning thoughts, that is not what God would say to you. His voice is gentle, encouraging, sometimes just a good thought. He wants you to love yourself and be loved. He loves you and he knows you are good. You are His child, dearly loved. He wants you to have the best, just like any good parent wants the best for their child. Anytime you think you are not good enough know that is not what God is saying, that is the demons attacking you again. Say I rebuke (case away) you by the power infested in me by Jesus Christ and believe in what you are saying and those horrible thoughts of worthlessness will diminish. Tell your self God loves me, and believe it, cause He does. He will heal you if you want to be healed and are persistent in believing you will be healed mind, body, and soul. May God Bless you with comfort, provision, and favor. Thank you so much for sharing. Really great write. :)

Yes sp...that's it The pain and the truth. Another gem.

a good poem depicting pain....you write well

good poem. Suggests the issue, but never raises it so leaves it to the reader to understand, which always makes for a better story, as it feels like you are unraveling it, and not being told it.

well written poem by you for us! ! ..joking....phenomenal indeed!

Love is like a two headed beast, one has a kiss so sublime whilst the other spits venom at the heart... It can be very difficult trust in this beast having seen the venom and felt the pain... Very nice poem.

I'm glad you posted this! It is truly a phenomenal poem, a very passionate write. I love it. :)

I'm glad you posted this! :) It is truly a phenomenal poem! :)

This is a very interesting and very smooth write. Good poem