Wednesday, November 9, 2011

The Mole Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blackness grew surrounding her mole
It grew in a cluster and looked like coal
Under her skin it just grew and grew
A mass of cells raging and very new
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Donna Caldwell
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Bri Edwards 11 June 2013

your message makes up for what i consider some deficiencies in the poetry. perhaps cutting out the rhyming would allow readers to concentrate more on your message; some of the rhymes (a few) are distracting anyway. but thanks for sharing AND i highly recommend your poem MALE CHAUVINIST PIG.....maybe even to a few pigs! oink. oink. i'll add you to my favoritepoets list.

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

The melanoma.....hmm........................ beautiful piece of writing unmatchable

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Dave Walker 09 November 2011

Wow, a warning to everyone. A amazing poem. An heart felt poem.

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Donna Caldwell

Donna Caldwell

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