The Modern Valentine Comments

They say woman is a fickle creature, but it is the men who are more fickle. Whenever most men hear the words marriage or pregnant they run like scalded hounds as fast as they can. Men should be in a case that reads 'break glass only in case of reproduction'. I'm serious, the men I have known have been abusive, dumb, wild, uncaring, sordid, lame, and thick in the head. Did I mention abusive? I'm sorry for ranting but this just brought back many horrific memories for me. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

I almost climbed inside this one.It was so interesting and so moving.Amazing write.Love Duncan

This is a nice ryhming flowing poem with a fantastic tale. Keep your talent flowing!

I agree with Scarlett. A very sad tale but great read. Kept my interest all the way to the end. Love Gyp's

SAD, SAD little Valentine, with her broken heart. How I feel for her, left with the baby valentine to rear by herself. Poor little girl.

I really like this story, it flows well and had me caught up with the little valentine! Moyaxx