The Modern Era Of Free And Extra Comments

on product the free (extra/discount) comes interestingly; but on humanity the free (violence) comes terribly//// excellently pointed out

In sleep, I go to the moon and Look yonder to the world, A happy, green and blue Heavily loaded with witty and Costly human beings, is Moving stumbling Wearing a dusty sheet of Violence, entirely Free. Great feelings wth appropriate poet-craft. again 10 mfor you.

i never heard of this brand/product: Horlicks India - Big Basket Horlicks is the top milk powder brand in India. Buy Horlicks foodles, junior horlicks and horlicks lite online here and get attractive discount on a............... Horlicks...........sounds like something one might get arrested for dong around here. [that is supposed to be a joke] these lines and phrases (especially) I don’t understand: “And lineless wounded as 20% extra.” ……………could you mean “lifeless”? if so, I still don’t understand. “But which I pay and which I Get as free or extra ….” “Costly human beings, ” ………..costly? wealthy? =========================== my favorite stanza: “In sleep, I go to the moon and Look yonder to the world, A happy, green and blue Heavily loaded with witty and Costly human beings, is Moving stumbling Wearing a dusty sheet of Violence, entirely Free. “ ………………is it “the world” which is moving stumbling wearing? that would make sense. a Poet’s Note would help I think. thanks for sharing. bri :)

Nicely presented modern day environment. World is facing the wrath of terrorism and fear.....10