Friday, March 21, 2014

The Mistakened Past Comments

Rating: 5.0

The one you are dying to change
Oh how life passes by so fast
Doesn't give you a chance to correct
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Everyone makes mistakes..forgive yourself first and then accept apologies..nice poem..a ten

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Mariam Daoud 21 March 2014

To Gajanan Mishra: Thank you for the comment, and that you actually bothered reading my poem. Makes me feel proud.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 March 2014

broken heart remains scattered, good writing.

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Mariam Daoud

Mariam Daoud

Michigan
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