The Mist Of Love Comments

Awe, such a lovely poem...I almost cried at the end...thank you for sharing, Jesus James...I would be glad if you could visit my poem Raindrops Keeps on Falling Thank you...Perfect 10!

Clearly written but sad at the end

Great Title, The Mist Of Love AS a mist we all should have a chance for Love. But I understand that a mist is temporary. The Mist will return.

A beautiful sad poetical interlude of losing love, it's mist disappearing with the wind. Touches the heart strings of sorrow carefully with interior tears. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

a lovely poem with a sad ending. good imagery

A lovely poem, excellent imagery!

The truth of a mystical love is Crystal clear in this write..... I liked the way you expressed yr emotion

flow like brook singing dancing advancing lovely write

Love is like a sprayed perfume, lovely to live with it around...but the mist of love is not forever sometimes, it gone when wind blows...heart feel hurt when it feel best first then we lost at last..nice poem James, it kinda remind me to your contest poem_Soul

love- no more, good write, thanks.