As I strode along the peevish road
I found myself looking for abode
But all I found was a sea of mist
And instantly, sharply it made me twist.
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thats just great writing man. mist is a nice metaphor to use. something about
'And as I lurk in this sea of mist
My face blushes, I clench my fist' made me applaud lol. nice write man ill read more sometime :)
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thats just great writing man. mist is a nice metaphor to use. something about 'And as I lurk in this sea of mist My face blushes, I clench my fist' made me applaud lol. nice write man ill read more sometime :)