Sunday, December 6, 2009

The Mist Comments

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As I strode along the peevish road
I found myself looking for abode
But all I found was a sea of mist
And instantly, sharply it made me twist.
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Lekë Loshi
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Adam Reed 06 April 2010

thats just great writing man. mist is a nice metaphor to use. something about 'And as I lurk in this sea of mist My face blushes, I clench my fist' made me applaud lol. nice write man ill read more sometime :)

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Prishtina, Kosovo
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