Friday, January 29, 2016

The Missing Wrinkles Comments

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Sweetheart! I have kept a record of my kisses,
I see a few wrinkles are missing from your face.
Let me read the wrinkles,
I want to know which the kisses are
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Khalid Saifullah 07 August 2018

a very good comment by Kelly Kurt, a diary of pains and pleasures.

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Kelly Kurt 30 January 2016

A dairy of wrinkles and kisses. The manuscript of a lifetime of love.

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M Asim Nehal 29 January 2016

Awesome, keeping record of kisses is unique and counting stocks of kisses is amazing all in all a fantastic love poetry yet again.10 +++++

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Abhilasha Bhatt 29 January 2016

time couldn't change them in wrinkles. How naughty are the women! When they preserve something in their hearts, it becomes mermaids! .... A beautiful poem as usual......thank you for sharing :)

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