Sunday, October 20, 2013

The Missing Thing Comments

Rating: 4.5

He told his love he loved her
and still she turned away.
He brought her diamonds shining bright
and thought that she would stay.
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Edwina Reizer
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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2013

This is probably your first (or one of the first few?) poem that I have read and let me tell you that I am simply amazed! It's so sweet! 'a song to satisfy the part that nothing else could fill' It's often difficult to sing that song, but it's worth a try!

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