Wednesday, March 17, 2010

The Missing Piece Comments

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The missing piece, found.
Relieved.
It clicked into place
It made the picture whole, complete.
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Lesley Merrin
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Austin Dempsey 13 April 2010

Interesting, love it, keep writing.

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Kim Davies 17 March 2010

Lesley, I love this poem, it says so much in so few carefully chosen words. The odds against finding the missing piece and the picture remaining incomplete is an apt metaphor on the difficulty in finding the exact right person to complete you and make your life complete. Well done my friend.

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