Monday, August 28, 2017

The Missing Flowers Comments

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The gray man hardly sited
So he was in his bed all day.
Knowing it was not the healthiest way.
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Julio 2 Amarante
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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

A good poem, very well wrote....word choice and you cleverly used them...good flow of lines. awesome read, keep sharing & writing.. :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 October 2019

Although that changes nothing, for I know how The Skies and the Waters of the Earth and Air May miss me, because I sensed their Despair As an inner Cold Dark Feeling I cannot bear......very fine and very expressive of inner turmoil and full of emotion. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Chinedu Dike 08 September 2019

An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. An interesting story written with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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