Monday, August 22, 2016

The Misses Comments

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That day, I stood on the hill top
I forgot what to draw
And the emperor Sun was in front of me
Though I was full with all the colors
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Arupam Maity
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Geetha Jayakumar 02 September 2016

A Beautiful write. Many times we miss something. But I feel nothing is missing in this beautiful poem. I loved the flow of words. Keep writing.

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Arupam Maity 03 September 2016

thanks for your beautiful, poetic comments

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Indranil Sengupta 26 August 2016

Great. Good idea. Let us talk about this when we meet.

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Arupam Maity 26 August 2016

Thanks for your interest in this write up.

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Uttaran Chaudhuri 22 August 2016

Great attempt! ! The idea behind the lines is beautiful.

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Arupam Maity 24 August 2016

Thanks!

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Uttaran Chaudhuri 22 August 2016

Very introspective Arupam babu. I loved the last stanza.

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Arupam Maity 24 August 2016

Thanks once again!

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Sriranji Aratisankar 22 August 2016

Well expression of feelings.. welcome to the world of poems.. I offer U big 10.. and request you to go through my poems.. Thanks for sharing...

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Arupam Maity 24 August 2016

Thanks Sriranji! Nice to know you.

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Sriranji Aratisankar 22 August 2016

well expression of feelings. welcome Arupam. I offer U big 10. I do invite you on my pages.

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Arupam Maity 24 August 2016

Thanks once again! Obviously I'll read your pages.

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