Monday, May 14, 2018

The Missed Embrace Comments

Rating: 5.0

Touchable distance is closeness.
Out of reach even by a point
Is a distance.
A distance can grow wider
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

Dear Poet Anil Kumar Panda, Thank you very much for reading my poem and relating it with your own experience which was similar to mine. I am much inspired by your comment and generous rating of the poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

@Geetha Jayakumar, Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment. I am much inspired. I've just read your poem 'A Glow From Within'. The poem is enlighening, awakening. Loved it very much.

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2020

@Bharati Nayak, Thank you very much for quoting from my poem and your thoughts as comment. 'In separation, memories are only solace' - couldn't agree more!

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Khairul Ahsan 25 August 2020

@Valsa George, You are very right. 'Even within visual contact, distance can grow wider! ' Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 June 2018

What a beautiful write! ! Very touching. Remembered the day when I see off my son for overseas assignments. Thanks for sharing.10+++++

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 June 2018

Touching write. Though its the Missed Embrace from far when its seen, than being in heart is very near. Loved reading it.

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Bharati Nayak 26 May 2018

Touchable distance is closeness. Out of reach even by a point Is a distance That can grow wider Even within visual contact. Beyond that Is only for the mind to see, Nurture and pray for. - - -Absolutely beautiful poem- - - - Beyond a point only mind can see.In heart we keep images of loved ones- - In separation, memories are only solace.

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Valsa George 24 May 2018

Even within visual contact, distance can grow wider! But touchable distance is closeness! You are absolutely right Khairul! Geographical distance is never a barrier for people in developing closeness!

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Hazel Durham 22 May 2018

Creative and moving poem about seperation of loved ones overseas, a very beautiful write!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

@Hazel Durham, Glad to see you visiting my poem after a long time. Much inspired by your thoughtful comment, thank you!

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Unwritten Soul 22 May 2018

Oh that kind of feeling....i think you extend that through poetry, such a comfy one!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 May 2018

Distance starts growing step by step when first you lose physical touch, then visual contact and then eventually mental remembrance. Thanks for your nice comment, @Unwritten Soul.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 May 2018

Feelings of a father seeing off his son so impressively painted in beautiful words.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 May 2018

I am glad you've read this poem and commented on it, @Akhtar Jawad. You've truly understood the feelings!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 May 2018

Dear Khairul, such a touching poem....10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

Thanks, @Bernard F. Asuncion for your kind words and generous rating. Much inspired, appreciate! Just now I've read your wonderful poem 'Heartaches Will Never Last and rated it.

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Robert Murray Smith 14 May 2018

A good poem that has depth. +++10

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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2018

Dear @Robert Murray Smith, Thanks for honoring this poem with the first comment soon after it saw the light of the day. Your appreciation and generous rating of the poem has inspired me much more than I can say. Appreciate very much.

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