Tuesday, May 12, 2009

The Mirror Tells The Tale Comments

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I look into the mirror
but all I see
looking back at me
it sadness
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Matthew Harrison 18 August 2009

I love the structure, but I feel you left more on the table to be said, that there was more to the story. The structure is there, the meaning, the story, but not your trademark depth.

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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