As I stare into the mirror,
My life flashes by.
As I stare into the mirror,
Tears begin to fill my eyes.
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idk what to say....the words just wont come out -speechless- in a good way! ! seems like a song (:
Anyhow, it is good that you have looked into the mirror! Yes, every one should!
A little disjointed, but still good. I get what you were trying to say here.
Apoet Bangla: thank you soo much. i have no idea what utterance means, but i can guess at it using context. thanks.
I was dating, Then hating Guy after guy. And breaking their hearts very honest utterance, but you are now only 13. So its the real time to look forward what will be after 18. Shocking really. You need a magic mirror to look at your innerself. Where you actually want to reach, select a destination and run. Your construction is like real poem. Stick on it. Enjoyed your writing. Write more....Run long...... Apoet Bangla
interesting - a profound piece. keep it up u will be a great poet - if your books sells - i will buy it :)
o wow that's great i love it so much i feel as if i can relate to it some how
Great poem. I love how self-reflecting it is. Great job :)