Tuesday, April 7, 2009

The Mirror Comments

Rating: 3.0

She stares at herself in the mirror,
Unaware of what is truely inside.
Her vision has never been clearer.
She finally feels satisfied.
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Shyana Keajls
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Noel Horlanda 09 April 2009

mirror, mirror who is the fairest of them all? I remember that. A couple of lines at the beginning has rough rhymes but in the next following lines it went smoothly, good flow yah know? I still consider it excellent.

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Charlotte Andreski 07 April 2009

Shy, (Yeah, I'm shortening your name because I won't get used to the full one for a while) I think that you should be whatever you want to be. Wash away the make-up, love Because you really don't need it. But give me some of this strength, Because after what He's done to you and what He's done to me, I think we're just stronger after all (:

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Billie Baldwin 07 April 2009

Greeting! The mirror is when you look at yourself and see yourself for what God created you to be, Free to be whatever you want to be. Blessing!

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