Saturday, October 1, 2005

The Mirror Comments

Rating: 2.0

A mirror hung upon a wall.
A man, quite handsome, also tall
stepped up to look inside the glass
and gave himself the nod, the pass.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ernestine Northover 02 October 2005

Now this I really enjoyed reading Herbert. Nice flow to it. I've met a few people like this one and underneath they are really quite pathetic! Sad. Sad. Sincerely Ernestine

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 October 2005

You have no idea how I tire of being the subject of you and Mahnaz's creative 'pieces'! LOL

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 01 October 2005

Beautiful! I enjoyed it! Thank you!

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