Saturday, June 23, 2018

The Mirage Comments

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Love is dead
It was alive when you were a child
But it is no more
You lost it somewhere along the way
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2021

A magnificent poem.... admirations!

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 January 2019

Love is dead It was martyred In the struggle for existence Perished in the process of growing up...painful realizations of relationships on the modern days. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Ruta Mohapatra 23 January 2019

Thank you for appreciating the emotions expressed in the poem! Reality sometimes strikes hard!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 July 2018

Tragically going to be true. We all have lost the beautiful form of love we used to feel in our childhood days and adolescence. Afterwards it has started becoming rare and rarer. No more unconditional love, after our parents are once gone, till we ourselves become parents. Thanks for the beautiful poem dear poetess friend. Regards Subhas

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Ruta Mohapatra 23 January 2019

Thank you for the positive comments and for appreciating my poem!

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