They took
To each other
As birds,
Take to song
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very wonderful imagery with optimistic message greeting the readers with bright future 5/5 well done
A beautiful poem of love so simply and spontaneously crafted. Yes, true love gives hope and light. Very heartwarming.
This LOVE you celebrate is a recognition by two sincere people their fates are already connected to each other and so love flowers. But it's not a literal miracle, which involves a suspension of natural law. This love comes deep inside each of their hearts and they make a choice to be faithful to that impulse. They are responsible for their happiness. I find this poem to be so fresh, so innocent, so sweet. Amen to that.