Saturday, August 20, 2011

The Miracle Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun is playful with hungry eyes
It transforms African rivers into gold mines.
It embraces the reins with a glistening blanket
Leaping the heart of a weakened toddler.
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Nicoletta Klokkari
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Emily Oldham 20 July 2012

Amazing. I was sucked in from the first line. Great use of personification, really clever and effective. Keep writing!

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