Thursday, November 1, 2012

The Mind Vs The Heart, Comments

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Would you allot me a lot in your mind,
To be the sole proprietor of my prospect,
To treat me as you treat yourself,
To protect me as you protect yourself,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Patti Masterman 07 November 2012

I like your command of your words, and how your imagination flies freely above the ground.

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An index of thoughts un parallel indeed. True proportions of identical entities is a mission on board. I consider the poem to be a pointer to the stark reality in life. A good write

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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 November 2012

A praise worthy poem indicating the difference between the heart and mind and longing to be with the mind! Really a fantastic thought! I love the great write. Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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