The Mind Inside My Hero Comments

i love this poem. you should read my poem 'Safe Harbor' i guess it's kind of similar.

hmmm dont really get it? whats it bout?

Poem comes across mature, in nature for your young years. As they say - KEEP TRUCKIN.

You are a very talented young poet, Ana. This is an excellent, well thought out write. Great imagery. Very impressive indeed. Thanks for the invitation. Best wishes to you. Richard

This is a very impressive poem, Ana, a poem that is mature beyond your brief years. It is quite well written with excellent phrasing and imagery in every verse. I was wondering if at the end of the second verse, the final word in it's last line was meant to be 'shield' instead of 'shielf, ' which is not an English word that I know of. That aside, this is a clearly written poem, obviously one quite well thought out, and for a person of your tender age, a very impressive write. You are blessed with a great talent for expression. Carl.

I really appreciated the imagery here. Thanks for posting!

That was a very good poem. I liked the meaning behind it, along with the words. Good job!

i agree with others, this is very honest and overall a honest well thought out poem...very well done

You have a very unique style of writing and a very honest from the heart. Keep writing always in the future.

Very honest, deep poetry, beautifull written. Great job.10

'None who know a love that requires submission can know the true path.' -Nagourta

What a wonderful poem a want of a read so many times will I so dream...Thank you...