Wednesday, January 7, 2009

The Mind Comments

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The mind is a powerful thing
What you put into it sometime may sting
It may keep you up at night
and turn on that bulb of light
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Sophonie Asia Joseph
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Vaibhav Pandey 07 January 2009

a good attempt.. keep it up

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the mind is a wonderful thing and can wonder, it can give us great ideas or sting us with the contents we fill it with the mind can accoplish great things wen put to good use, great poem :)

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Keith Hendrickson 07 January 2009

'it may keep you up at night and turn on that bulb of light' i like that a lot. very very nice piece

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