Sunday, December 8, 2019

The Milk Cows Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mombies bellow as the dawn draws near
And dust hangs low in the morning air.
And out to the east a franklin calls
As the workmen scrub the milking stalls.
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Terry Dawson
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Mark Meck 10 December 2019

Good and smooth code switching from Shona to English producing a well painted picture of farm life experience.

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Kingsley Egbukole 08 December 2019

Beautiful poem, well articulated...10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments and rating.

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Rajnish Manga 08 December 2019

The landscape, action and the picture beautifully complete the rustic life of village folk. Thanks for this exquisite piece of poetry.

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Terry Dawson

Terry Dawson

Harare, Zimbabwe.
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