Thursday, May 5, 2011

The Mighty Lion Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rock rises in the grasslands,
a beast stands upon it.
A grumble rises from his belly,
a roar escapes his throat.
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Jon McIntosh
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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