Tuesday, December 16, 2025

The Midnight Watch Comments

Rating: 5.0

You turned my garden to a field of flint,
A theatre of wars I never sought to wage.
I wore your shadows like a fingerprint,
And carried your silence like a heavy cage.
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joe acacia 19 December 2025

such an inspiring poem. it's dark but deep, beautiful and powerful. this is such a beautiful peace

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Isadora Quagmire 16 December 2025

What a beautiful but tragic work... Thank you for sharing this powerful poem! Brilliantly penned!

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Timber Koleden 16 December 2025

The striking rhythm and the clever rhymes make it such a glorious read! I love the intense imagery in this poem too, like comparing yourself to a flower growing up through cracked stone. This is a masterpiece that is sure to stop any reader in their tracks! Keep writing!

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Timber Koleden 16 December 2025

This poem is so very grim and sad, yet it is thunderingly powerful!

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